pho valley poem

a surfer looks at the ocean

as a man looks at a beautiful woman.

“I’ll probably destroy you,” she cracks.

“I love you,” he shouts back.

“oh ya? alright.

pony up handsome.

let’s play.”

eat it

then flow.

breaking right

breaking left

caressing long beautiful crescendos of her limbs.

over and over

and over


“tired yet?” she teases.

“just one more wave,” he pleads.

“no. I’m bored.

I think it’s time for you to


exit in a barrel

(unless she’s feeling kind

and plops you at the door.)

“I’ll never turn my back on you,” he swears.

“I don’t even care!” she laughs.

get in the line-up.

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2 thoughts on “pho valley poem

  1. Elizabeth says:

    And here I thought you were writing about a bowl of noodle soup!

  2. nice styles. Gotta a bit of a bpNichol vibe

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